Azuri said:
I'd suggest adding the pokémon that aren't there right now. Take a look at this
http://iblamelee.co.uk/pwo/wiki/index.p ... oken_Store page (The pokémon you can buy with Tokens) a lot of them are unavailable in the wiki.
This has already been noted on the task list for the creation of the remainder of the undocumented Pokemon pages. It's mostly 3rd generation Pokemon whose pages are missing - those of which haven't been prioritized in the past due to their unavailability as wild spawns. Regardless, if you seek information on those missing-page Pokemon, this is still available from the Pokedex/Pokemon location/etc functions on playerdex, which provide automated data; it's
always up-to-date as that information is drawn from the database, which can be seen as more resourceful as the PWO wiki Pokemon in general.
Limitless said:
http://iblamelee.co.uk/pwo/wiki/index.php?title=Starter_Island
Opinions on the guide?
I'll add anything you guys feel is worth adding in.
I feel like it explains pretty much everything that needs explaining.
I believe it summarizes the area, and the quest that it entails, pretty well, and it covers everything that is notable about it. However, for better organization purposes, I would suggest adding sections/sub-sections for different pieces of information, for a more navigation-friendly layout of information.
To add a section header, enclose it in == == marks; to add a sub-section, enclose the sub-section header in === === marks (an additional one on each side), and the continuous pattern is self-explanatory. Example:
==Section Header==
===Sub-section Header==
==Section Header 2==
===Sub-section Header 1==
===Sub-section Header 2==
To apply that for your page in particular (IMO of how the layout scheme should be arranged)
Initial overview paragraph(s) on the area itself.
==Series of mini-quests== <- Paraphrased, but feel free to rename it to your choosing. This includes details on mini-quests required to obtain pokeballs/potions/a pokedex/pokemoney.
Speaking to the old man NPC to proceed to the next segment of starter's island.
===Mini-quest 1===
===Mini-quest 2===
===Mini-quest 3===
===Mini-quest 4===
==Departing==
==Overview Map== <- Not entirely necessary, but viewers may be interested in viewing the map of the entire area - an image which will be retrievable in the following article I'm about to explain my additional note.
Additional Note: This page has technically already been created
here, but your page includes a lot more details that improve the original page significantly. I would request an active member of the wiki staff to move the page, which renames it,
or to copy/paste your information to the linked page (as that's technically more preferential as the article name, as that is widely acknowledged name of the area), and change the "Starter Island" article to a redirect page, redirecting to the other article.
Minor Suggestion(s): Quoted from your article:
He'll ask you what region you want to start at, Kanto or Johto. When you finish Kanto you can go to Johto, and vice versa.
The Choice
Kanto is where Red/Blue/Yellow, and FireRed/LeafGreen took place. Johto is where Gold/Silver/Crystal, and SoulSilver/HeartGold took place.
To make this a little more concise, I would simply mark both regions as internal links, which link to articles that explain the regions fairly well for those players who are curious about the distinctions between them.
Exemplification (including usage of the wiki markup language):
Code:
He'll prompt you to choose region you want to start at, [[Kanto]] or [[Johto]]. When you finish Kanto you travel to Johto, and vice versa.